Not soft

I’ve been really good about writing everyday, just casual stuff and story ideas. I’m setting myself a new challenge to write a poem each week, whether bad or crappy, and post them to torment you. 


Golden orbs cratered by bronze

flecks glint in the lamp light and

black slits dilate wide and thin

twitching in time with ears

pricked to invisible sounds and ghosts

making a habit of flitting past my door

to burrow in, suggesting to my brain

before unresting dreams.

Not soft.


3 thoughts on “Not soft

  1. I actually felt creeped out with that one. What threw off the ominous vibe, for me, was seeing a sort of cat-like alien near the end. I was glad to not be fully disturbed though! Hehe

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